there is a lot of background noise and the voice audio is heard very low

yes

Thank you for letting us know Vrikson. I hope the audio is clear now.

(apologies for the background noises everyone)

Could Jim increase the volume of his mike

Could Jim increase the volume of his mike?

Hi Vrikson, we will try to increase the volume.

Audio is fine for me

Thank you for letting us know.

Audio is good for me as well. No noise and the volume is good

Should the length of the comment document matter?

yes

Thank you

hey everyone! sorry to be joining late, was in another meeting.

Welcome, Elsa :)

thanks Maryam! :)

Bruna is having connection issues

I like to say soething

Well, sometimes theres just so much background information that we are not aware about.

Sorry im in a library i cant speak through the mike.

Technical background of the issue I think.

Thank you, Liz. I will read out your comment

Maryam, I too have connexion issues, and when connected the audio is extremely low, and I do have all the speakers volume up.

Hi Vrikson, I am sorry to hear that. I will send you a private chat so we can investigate this further

Personally, its diffcult to differentiate between peronal views as compared to the view of the constituency.

*personal

or if one is supposed to contribute as representing the constituency or as an individual.

@Bukola I agree with you, just that you want to be sure you are carrying everyone along.

thank you!

I had a question

How much background info should one dig into before making a draft?

Thank you for your question Liz.

Then how do you solve the problem of technical limitations. Because some of us are from non technical backgrounds. It it possible to solicit views from the tech members?

Thanks!

Is it possible to have a template of comment writiing where you have background, point, summary (with recommendations..number of words, sample phrases, etc)

also is it possible to have a peer review group for comments with intention of building capacity around engaging in comments writing

from the different consituencies document that you have showed, is there a particular template for each constituencies? some were in tabular format and some were not?

Jim is right.We have to start writing what we think, how we think it, and then begin polishing what we write. It is not easy at first, but eventually it gets easier with time, and practice.

Thank you

yes

yes

Will you also review non icann work? :)

Thank you Jim , that is so helpful to know

Jim, thank you for the offer to do pro bono reviewing things wr write. Does it all have to be ICANN related ? Does it all have to be in English? What's your email?

I'm sorry I have to leave now, hope to catch up with the recordings if it will be shared.

Thanks for attending Bukola