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GAC Communique Drafting Sessions 4, 5, & 6 of 6 - Shared screen with speaker view
nico
03:23:17
+1 USA
Luisa Paez (Canada GAC)
03:25:39
Thanks, Fabien. Yes that works from our side.
Luisa Paez (Canada GAC)
03:26:08
And thank you to our Japan colleague for the new text.
Teruyuki Shibata, Japan
03:26:25
After "highlighting that" in the first sentence, we would like to emphasize the content that this kind of hopping continues in domain name abuse and that registrar efforts are important.And, the explanation of "Registrar Hopping" has been moved to the note.
Ian Sheldon - GAC Australia
03:27:13
+1 Netherlands
Luisa Paez (Canada GAC)
03:30:01
Good point Susan for clarity purposes.
Alisa Heaver
03:31:03
Thans you Chris for the context!
Susan Chalmers (GAC, United States)
03:31:20
"it is important to promote work in this area." ?
nico
03:31:47
I would suggest: ´... the GAC recommends ICANN org to ensure accuracy of registration data, as well as continuous auditing of registrars by ICANN, in order to mitigate DNS abuse´
nico
03:32:13
in order to make it a little bit ´stronger´
nico
03:32:26
... or something similar
Chris Lewis-Evans
03:32:51
Agree with Susans suggestion in chat
nico
03:32:54
+1 USA
Laureen Kapin
03:35:50
ok with ICANN72 reference.
Nico Caballero - GAC Paraguay
03:39:05
Would this suggestion be acceptable for Japan (actually, everybody): ´... the GAC recommends ICANN org to ensure accuracy of registration data, as well as continuous auditing of registrars by ICANN, in order to mitigate DNS abuse´ ?
Jorge Cancio
03:41:51
very helpful, Jaideep 🙏🏼
Gulten Tepe - ICANN Org
03:42:53
Friendly reminder for GAC members to speak at a reasonable pace for interpreters to catch your remarks.
Susan Chalmers (GAC, United States)
03:45:58
We support your suggestion, Chair.
Mistura Aruna - Nigerian Communications Commission
03:49:47
I agreed with Paraguay
Jose Franco GAC-Portugal
03:50:46
is registar hopping an abuse of domain or is another abuse? if not na abuse of domain we should write ".... type of abuse continues and…" instead of "..ttype of abuse of domain names continues"
Nico Caballero - GAC Paraguay
03:54:30
+1 Chris
Chris Lewis-Evans
03:55:24
+1 Jose same as my point
Teruyuki Shibata, Japan
03:55:46
registrar hopping means that regitrants transferrung the same domein names to
Teruyuki Shibata, Japan
03:55:54
other registrars
Jose Franco GAC-Portugal
03:55:57
thanks @Chris
Laureen Kapin
03:59:58
We can remove specific country reference to be consistent.
Jose Franco GAC-Portugal
04:01:34
english issue: the initial abuse was singular now is plural, write?
Susan Chalmers (GAC, United States)
04:01:39
Concur, Manal.
Luciano Andrade
04:02:46
Those types of abuse
Luisa Paez (Canada GAC)
04:09:25
Thank you, Kenneth. Good points.
Ian Sheldon - GAC Australia
04:12:46
Good edit, Kenneth. Much cleaner.
Luisa Paez (Canada GAC)
04:14:34
Thank you to our Japan colleague and everyone's efforts to make this text clearer.
Domenico Alfieri (GAC Italy)
04:18:24
should we remove [following] in GIs section?
Dai Morishita(JAPAN MIC)
04:18:47
Thank you for your cooperation.(JP)
Jorge Cancio
04:19:15
thx… I feel we solved this issue
Julia Charvolen - ICANN Org
04:21:52
@Rosalind, is your hand an old hand please?
Julia Charvolen - ICANN Org
04:22:02
thank you @Rosalind
Luisa Paez (Canada GAC)
04:26:17
The 80 GAC members and 80 GAC Observers include both in person and virtual attendance, correct? Just double-checking, thank you.
Luisa Paez (Canada GAC)
04:26:35
*8 GAC Observers
Nico Caballero - GAC Paraguay
04:26:48
... I was going to ask exactely the same question :-)
Nigel Hickson UK GAC
04:26:52
@Fabienne - small issue but on these bulleted lists (re GAC meetings; can we put an "and" in at end of the penultimate bullet; just reads easier.
Fabien Betremieux - ICANN Org
04:29:04
@Nigel. Thanks, let me consider with the team and consider practice to date
Nigel Hickson UK GAC
04:33:23
@Fabien, thanks, not a big point; but normally when one has list; there is a ";" at end of each bulleted text and then the "and" after penultimate one
Nico Caballero - GAC Paraguay
04:33:58
+1 USA
Nico Caballero - GAC Paraguay
04:34:21
+1 UK
Gulten Tepe - ICANN Org
04:39:16
@Luisa Paez, correct.
Luisa Paez (Canada GAC)
04:42:17
Thank you, Gulten.
Luisa Paez (Canada GAC)
04:43:59
Manal, one minor editorial change under Sub Pro section text on the last sentence to read better. Suggest replacing "relative to closed generics" to "related to closed generics".
Luisa Paez (Canada GAC)
04:47:48
Or even cleaner text we can delete "relative" and replace by "on closed generic applications..."
Nico Caballero - GAC Paraguay
04:48:27
some very minor, unimportant suggestions: maybe there should be a semi-colon at the end of the number bullets in the first paragraph? Also, in the second paragraph, Abuse maybe should be in small letter (instead of capital letter)
Rosalind KennyBirch
04:48:50
Small editing comment - Should that be continue, rather than continues?
Ian Sheldon - GAC Australia
04:49:53
shorter the better, I think?
Rosalind KennyBirch
04:50:05
[Re the 'continue' edit - it is in the penultimate sentence in the DNS abuse mitigation section]
Nigel Hickson UK GAC
04:50:08
Yes, agree
Nico Caballero - GAC Paraguay
04:50:21
+1 UK
Luciano Andrade
04:51:09
+ 1UK
Jose Franco GAC-Portugal
04:51:40
[DNS abuse mitigation section] missing dot commas
BECKHAM Brian
04:51:53
Maybe a comma after “steward”?
Jose Franco GAC-Portugal
04:53:52
I have to see the text again "Beckham"
Jose Franco GAC-Portugal
04:55:18
the word encourge appears repeated in two continuous sentences
Nigel Hickson UK GAC
04:55:19
Agree Luisa
Nico Caballero - GAC Paraguay
04:55:29
+1 Canada
Jose Franco GAC-Portugal
04:55:39
encourage
Fabien Betremieux - ICANN Org
04:55:41
Thank you all for the edits
Jorge Cancio
04:57:50
Thanks, Kenneth!
Jorge Cancio
04:58:16
and thanks to Manal and all for another substantive Communique 🙏🏼👍🏼👍🏼
Domenico Alfieri (GAC Italy)
04:58:25
thank you all
SHI YOUNG CHANG
04:58:29
Thank you.
Susan Chalmers (GAC, United States)
04:58:30
Thank you, all, for such a positive and constructive communique drafting experience.
Luisa Paez (Canada GAC)
04:58:31
Thank you everyone and to Manal and support staff!!
Teruyuki Shibata, Japan
04:58:40
thank you all